User blog comment:Wiz Ardon, the Peculiar Enchanter/The Story of a Minifigure: Strange Odd Shadow Rewrite Beginning/@comment-28545920-20170520165008

The long awaited rewrite!! It has arrived! :D It's excellent! The beginning monologue (not sure if monologue is the correct term but it's close enough for now) just before Shadow is attacked feels a little unnatural- not bad grammar or anything like that, it's just a lot of information and questions that don't get explained until much further. It doesn't bother me since I've already read the rest of the story, however! I'm thoroughly enjoying reading these chapters and can't wait for more! :D